So, took a long time, but I got the stuff in between
forget the first part you will find
title. The Lost World Found
: On my laptop, thank God, never published.
Author: I own pizza bread.
fandom: original
positive note there is still the spelling.
negative strikes book but the entire plot, which consists only of Gesülze and would-be drama. One Sue, the relentless chase after her lost love, a study, the relentless chasing of Sue and demons who use any clichés. Voilà, le plot. The plot, it should only be touched on, is only indicated spongy, so voltage to produce. What does not work. Chapter 1
flicked
Bored the woman a piece of dust from the shoulder. (I always flick dust grains through the area that is next to flea Dressage my favorite pastime. Sometimes I write but also like bible quotes on rice grains.) She was more than that she was sitting in the chair, the legs swinging over an arm rest, leaning back against the other. She had long and smooth, dark red hair and eyes that hid behind the downcast eyelids with long lashes, amber.
description of the room (Öööh. whatever else.): Everything is covered with velvet or something red. In any case, there are two "Divan" (only the mob sitting on simple beds), and ...
On one of them sat a man with regular features, very similar to hers. He had shoulder-length black hair and piercing blue eyes, his looks a little weird, given so, unnatural. These eyes fixed them now. (Why should also look into the FIC someone normal? If even the plot is nothing here, then at least the scintillating eyes of charas! Geilo!)
"What you staring at me like that, Garon? Waiting for you that I really like the blanket on his head is? "She asked wearily.
Garon showed no emotion, just staring at her intently. The woman giggled
. Garon was at least amusing. (Yes, I'm laughing dead) How could it be that they are in a huge castle was where everything was just their well-being, and no one could take the boredom? (Hm, Call the Boys went out?) Garon finally answered, but without reference to the preceding question.
"You know, Sis, earlier it was funny here was not written as this Fic ..." The redhead was carefully and sat up in her chair. "You mean, when we were kids? As we still had fun, frogs killed with the pans from the kitchen, and ... " (Is that funny? Or interesting? I'll go hang myself. I am ashamed FS r myself!) Garon interrupted her. "Oh, Xelia why you always think in such small dimensions? No, I my time, as we all Terijal belonged. When the Elves were afraid. As us all afraid. When the people were our game balls. Do you remember? They died much funnier than the frogs. " (" Haha, look how funny ma dies! Since spladdert out blood everywhere! "Pseudo-psychoanalysis.) He sighed, then continued. "Before the establishment of this ridiculous city Kaldean" (Yes, ridiculous that dump, however, is particularly great wonder it did not.) , he spat the word literally, "before his complete seal by this dirty elves breed!" (SPANNEEEEND! )
blaaaa, the two are not only sisters, but like twins. And they are demons. From the royal family. What else ...
They had the best times experienced by the demons as they Terijal oppressed, their areas widened endless, all under his leadership. But then the elves had joined forces. At that time, they understood something of the nature and knew how she commanded. (reading for the lazy: "Wind, flipping it around my page!") This force had used it to him to seal . He , he was like a god for her. No, he was a god. (Mysterious, calling his name yet. Wow, this is indeed based on real power. Okay, I see myself not what this is for a purpose. Why have the seal because if, for they was a God? "Huh?" I think this is simply put quite misleading, and should I say, that he was like a god for the demons ... * Scratch head *) Nobody knew how old he was then. Older than any of them had ever been. He had been there before them all. (Hey, Tom Bombadil ...) He had incredible powers. Forces he had set for his people. And now he was sealed, was resting in the earth, water, air, fire, ice. (aha ... Must be so now rather fragmented, the Good.) And no one was in the Able to break the seal. Not even the elves.
Xelia and he - or rather, demons on their behalf - had been kidnapped and tortured many of them, they had all died in the attempt to break the seal. (would be interesting to a concrete expression of this seal, or any indication, so that one among them imagine what can. But I think I just did not know himself, should look like this ... headdesk.)
These foolish Elves thought Garon. Sun squander big powers do not see the importance of connection to nature for them. If only it for the demons were that simple. No, they drew their true power not so simple things like nature. (I still do not understand, which I thought was so cool to the idea of being able to chat with trees. Somehow, I find that now no longer as before as the epitome of power. "Tree slay this man! "-" Yes, if the next time he comes over here I take the attack in waiting * * ") In that case he would have to Xelias page has long since overrun Terijal. (I lol'd. Godzilla and King Kong?) The true power the demon was in him . (Nerv. .. maybe I would have liked for him just to think up a name rather than that stupid to do on mysteriously.)
Xelia makes ran to her brother, who's somehow finds cool. Also quite innovative. Anyway, they want to try again, this is not defined in detail to break seal. As, of course, is not mentioned. That could be something specific with autism do! Sue have ?????
3.0 or change of perspective: Is it a tree? Is it a branch? No, it's ... Booyah! Stu!
Lethiél awakened by an unusual noise. What's he been? (my brain that runs me out to the ears.) she was immediately wide awake and sat up in her bed. There it was again. It took her a while to realize that it was not a branch, which beat against the cabin wall, but someone who knocked on the door. (One of the very fast variety.)
Eternal Aufstehprozedur.
She carefully opened the door a crack and peered out. "Ere," she came across surprised out and opened it. (Speakers can! 1) you did not expect to see him here again. At that time, shortly after it was towed here, he had asked her, pushed and finally begged to return. She had stubbornly blocked and was at the end become clear. So clear that had gone Eré injured. (Do not get what it now is sooo bad that she moved into the forest. So it's yes can be overdone.) Now he was embarrassed in front of her, looked at the floor and scratched his head.
"Hello, Lethiél." He finally brought out and talked to the ground. "I know you will not see me but I thought ... maybe you did it change your mind. You know, when I saw you yesterday in Kaldean ... do not you talk to me. Why not, Lethiél? ("But speak Ere, is too tiring for me! Also does my heart is aching so much better.") During his monologue he had is increasingly spoken in a rage.
"I thought it would We clarified Eré. I only come to town to buy some essentials. However, I am glad to see you. you do not come in? " (Wtf? Suddenly it mutates to courtesy Sue? This somehow contradicts what I have previously been written about them.) you took a step to the side and gave the input for her childhood friend free. This, she stared for a moment, puzzled, then he entered reluctantly. He looked around the hut. She was small, just too tiny. Only fit into a straw bed, a table and a kitchenette. (Unfortunately fit then no more people in the hut, so the Sue sat on the table and the study .... on the "kitchen".)
... .. barren banter
"I come to ask you ... to ask you ..." he stuttered, obviously he did not know how he should express his concerns. Finally, he turned and saw her wake in the gray eyes. (heat, too stupid would sleep when the eyes.) They seemed to bore him to take off , after all these years of loneliness seemed Lethiél natural any shame that one came over when the other too long and too deeply in the eye, lost have. Quick Erédan looked away again. "Lethiél, come back."
But Sue remains true:
'Ere, I thought this would be clarified. No, I'm not coming back. No way. "
" Why not? Lethiél why? "He snapped, sounding sharper than he had intended. "Because of him? Is it because of him? "The thought hurt him. Was she not a bit grateful for what he had done for them? Was it her ridiculous vow always more important than he? (Ui ui ui as dramatic, the Oath, the mysterious HIM ... what do IHM Sue to the well with the IHN of daemons Twins? Hmmm ...!) "You know why. Let us not quarrel. If you came about, I must ask you to leave. " (The Sue remains cool because it is all matter and has sworn. This is so jaded real! -.-)
Mercy she looked into his eyes. (Oh my God!) He had no way to avoid it. (So help him but one!) How could she be so cruel? (DC He died of merciless eyes!)
"Lethiél, people talk about you," he snapped, "I can not stand it! I will not hear it! Lethiél "he grabbed her hands. He felt the ring, his ring. (This is unremarkable Sun it has to have what could NOT have to do with the two lots together.) it was so still. (Yes why not, she lives in the forest because of him, too ... so heroic. As consistent. So Sue.) The anger roused him with it. (* waves * behind)
The study further and repeats constantly begging. He offers the Sue, move in with him. The declines naturally. What is all this? Distract from the lack of plot.
Why could not they? Why she could not forget him , why not? (Yes, why? And why I could think up a name for him when I'm actually in every sentence mention? And why it sounds so dramatic? Why? Why, how and so on.) She was so matter what he took upon himself to defend them? You did not care that he suffered? (That must be hard for him. He's seems so real serious when he had offered to let her move in with you! Wow! Impressive, what is he willing to sacrifice everything.)
Stu escalates! Action and excitement, what will he do next?
He Lethiéls Hands free, but not without her here to tear down the beloved ring finger of from . Lethiél gasped tortured and made as if the ring finger Erédans firm grip steal, but in vain. Erédan turned on his heel and left the hut, slamming the door behind him.
She screamed his name, ripped the door and ran after him, but he had disappeared among the trees. (So what? But you can talk to trees, tell them that they should hold him! Oh wait, that's useless Suepower number 23 assists, but probably not as much.) And with him her ring, her beloved ring (her Schaaaaaaaaatz!) the only thing they still remembered the beloved, had lost them. (Schluchz.) Stunned, and with a feeling of emptiness, as if someone had ripped out a piece of her, she fell to the ground. The fingers of her right hand she felt the point at which had been the ring finger just a few minutes. (And even 2 seconds.) way. Fort
was now the ultimate proof that their beloved where did that was not all a pipe dream, away. Lethiél began to sob. They feared most, forgetting, losing his memory and at some point just to chase an empty shadow behind to love a formless spirit and to give him eternal fidelity. (Yes, and the problem they had not, as long as they still had that stupid ring is clear. God is the schmaltzy. I think more stilted drama fits into the records no longer pure.)
After so much kitsch and drama, I feel like after a 4-h GZSZ Marathon. But there is hope for my Lost Soul: It seems as if I had actually left it in one chapter. Anyway, I find more material, maybe but that is only a conspiracy of the Illuminati to the world of Badfics do pay off. Whatever, I'm often ashamed of myself, but could also laugh at me and I hope that her could you also. : D
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